From 9558a3ecbb61018aebcf05c5ab68e7b00dc189bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nathan Phillip Brink <ohnobinki@ohnopublishing.net>
Date: Mon, 12 Jul 2010 12:18:42 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Quick English review (I can't find much to improve :-p).

---
 sunrise-commit | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/sunrise-commit b/sunrise-commit
index c2cd98b..f72894f 100755
--- a/sunrise-commit
+++ b/sunrise-commit
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ find_repo() {
 		fi
 	fi
 
-	sayv "Ok, we're in ${SC_VCS} working tree. Let's see what I can do around here..."
+	sayv "Ok, we're in the ${SC_VCS} working tree. Let's see what I can do around here..."
 }
 
 is_whole_dir_removed() {
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ find_ebuilds() {
 		SC_CP=${PWD#${stripped}/}
 
 		SC_SCENARIO=ebuild-commit
-		sayv "We have some ebuilds for ${SC_CP} here."
+		sayv "We found ebuilds for ${SC_CP} here."
 	elif is_package_removal; then
 		local cplist category pkg rootprefix
 		# We can either have the category on the list or in PWD.
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ confirm() {
 				die 'Aborting.'
 				;;
 			*)
-				say "Response '${answ}' not understood, try again."
+				say "Your response '${answ}' not understood, try again."
 		esac
 	done
 }
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ main() {
 
 				if [ -z "${trivial}" ]; then
 					sayv '...and appending to it.'
-					echangelog "${commitmsg}" || die 'Please correct the problems pointed by echangelog.'
+					echangelog "${commitmsg}" || die 'Please correct the problems shown by echangelog.'
 					echo
 				fi
 
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ main() {
 				#say
 				req repoman manifest
 				if ! repoman full; then
-					[ -n "${force}" ] || die 'Please correct the problems pointed out by repoman.'
+					[ -n "${force}" ] || die 'Please correct the problems shown by repoman.'
 				fi
 				confirm
 			fi
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ main() {
 		package-removal)
 			vcs_status ${SC_CHANGE_LIST}
 			echo
-			say "Ready to commit ${WHITE}$(echo ${SC_CHANGE_LIST} | wc -w)${RESET} package removal(s), with message:"
+			say "Ready to commit ${WHITE}$(echo ${SC_CHANGE_LIST} | wc -w)${RESET} package removal(s), with commit message:"
 			say "${BGREEN}${SC_CP}: ${commitmsg}${RESET}"
 			confirm
 			vcs_commit "${SC_CP}: ${commitmsg}" ${SC_CHANGE_LIST}